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Let me tell you a story to make your spines shiver as we sit around here tonight.

Unaware that the creature was watching me slowly closing in.
As if all of time had stopped still I was frozen to the spot with fear.I wanted to fade.
I fell to my knees..Something came out of the trees to take me back to hell.
The blazing of the fire did not harm me as I walked on the coal and ashes.
And my spirit was stolen from my shell..And I was once again a dammed soul.

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Let me tell you a story to make your spines shiver as we sit around here tonight.

Unaware that the creature was watching me slowly closing in.
As if all of time had stopped still I was frozen to the spot with fear.I wanted to fade.
I fell to my knees..Something came out of the trees to take me back to hell.
The blazing of the fire did not harm me as I walked on the coal and ashes.
And my spirit was stolen from my shell..And I was once again a dammed soul.

Dragged back to hell.
Looking over the edge of the cliff like a man of the edge of sanity.
Looking over to the endless fires and demons that roamed it.
Looking behind you staring in

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The cycle..(Read desc)

I kill myself in small amounts
In each relationship it's not
About love.
Just another death
Just another person left in tears
Now I'm fading...
But then I will be dragged back
Then the cycle will start again..

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The cycle..(Read desc)

by ~TheManThatLaughed, May 2, 2012, 12:11:17 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

I kill myself in small amounts
In each relationship it's not
About love.
Just another death
Just another person left in tears
Now I'm fading...
But then I will be dragged back
Then the cycle will start again..

The cycle..(Read desc)by ~TheManThatLaughed

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

©2012-2013 ~TheManThatLaughed

This just reminded me of myself first of it was just something that I came up with it...then I wanted to expand on it...tell me what you think

I know its not very good but I am to improve..

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!xXTheXlivingXdeadXx Jul 30, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Interesting work. Very relatable. I like it :]

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~TheManThatLaughed Jul 31, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

Thank you Im glad you like it

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~nightmareendz May 7, 2012 Professional Artist

deep

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~TheManThatLaughed May 7, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

Yeah...It just reminded me of getting heart broken..

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~nightmareendz May 7, 2012 Professional Artist

lmao me to thats why i like it too mutch

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~TheManThatLaughed May 7, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

Yeah thanks

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~nightmareendz May 7, 2012 Professional Artist

np

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~HawkClawWarrior May 5, 2012 Student Digital Artist

hmmm...dat's nice, awesome n deep, i can kinda imagine dat...reminds me a lil' bit of the new pic i drew idk lol

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~TheManThatLaughed May 5, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

lol awesome

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*ravenvolf May 3, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I agree, very deep and moving - very good

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