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Let me tell you a story to make your spines shiver as we sit around here tonight.

Unaware that the creature was watching me slowly closing in.
As if all of time had stopped still I was frozen to the spot with fear.I wanted to fade.
I fell to my knees..Something came out of the trees to take me back to hell.
The blazing of the fire did not harm me as I walked on the coal and ashes.
And my spirit was stolen from my shell..And I was once again a dammed soul.
Dont judge..This is a WIP and was made out of boredom.
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BVBonToast Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... spooky - i like it :D
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks :D
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:iconbvbontoast:
BVBonToast Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D It's OK
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yay!
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Creativityshy Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks
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:iconcreativityshy:
Creativityshy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
finished version [link]
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:iconcreativityshy:
Creativityshy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it is really good :) you could totally be a writer :)
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
heh heh really?
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:iconcreativityshy:
Creativityshy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
of course :)
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yay
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silverblack9 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist
I love this! I'd love to read the finished version :3
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks :)
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silverblack9 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist
You are welcome! ^^
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ima work on it soon :P
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:iconsilverblack9:
silverblack9 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist
Yay! It better doesn't take too long to finish! :P
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
fingers crossed
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unicornsinuniforms Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow dude..... Epic props for your writing skills! :D
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks
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DragulasDragons Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
creepy... epic... Awesome~
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks :hug:
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DragulasDragons Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bitte hun~ :aww:
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yay
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XxtwistedzombiexX Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
tahts EPIC!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks :huggle: :)
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XxtwistedzombiexX Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
welcome ~le hugs you~ <3
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:) :glomp:
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JKL-Designs Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
this is truly amazingly written! *-* it's great how it's short but it's still complete; and it has some rhythm, i think that's important not just for poetry but for this kinda stuff too. :)
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks dude really appreciate it :huggle:
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:iconjkl-designs:
JKL-Designs Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
you're very welcome man ;p :huggle:
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Hows life? :)
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:iconjkl-designs:
JKL-Designs Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
same as always. what about you? :3
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
tired and bored
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:iconjkl-designs:
JKL-Designs Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
same here :p
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
nice night tonight :P
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TheLastVioletKnight Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounds cool- do you write stories generally?
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This was meant to be a song but it kinda turned out into a bit of both.
And no not really.
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Poetevill Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Awesome!
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks
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StupidNoodleCat Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's cool :) I wrote a poem to that same picture I think :p
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Cool :)
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
I like how haunting it feels. It's good.. um, need more polishing but hey, it's a wip so it's okay.
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks :P
This was made when I was bored btw XD
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
haha, well a lot of what I do is out of boredom too so yeah. x]
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ive done a finished version now btw
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:iconcrimsonletters:
crimsonletters Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
yeah? I'll look at it.
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:iconthemanthatlaughed:
TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks
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TsubakiUkitake Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing O.O
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Seriously?
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