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Mad world (Finished version of WIP)
Let me tell you a story to make your spines shiver as we sit around here tonight.

Unaware that the creature was watching me slowly closing in.
As if all of time had stopped still I was frozen to the spot with fear.I wanted to fade.
I fell to my knees..Something came out of the trees to take me back to hell.
The blazing of the fire did not harm me as I walked on the coal and ashes.
And my spirit was stolen from my shell..And I was once again a dammed soul.

Dragged back to hell.
Looking over the edge of the cliff like a man of the edge of sanity.
Looking over to the endless fires and demons that roamed it.
Looking behind you staring in
Please Mr Toro - poem
Please Mr Toro, I must know
What do you hide in that fro?
It's just so fluffy, like a cloud,
of which you must be very proud
But according to your singer Gee
There's something there not meant to be
He says it hides his favourite boa
He's threatened to shave it off with a lawn mower!

Please Mr Toro, let me know
What do you hide in your fro?
It looks so tasty, like candy floss
I think you must use Elvive Nutri-Gloss
But according to your guitarist Frank
You're naughty and you need to be spanked
He says that your hair hides his dogs
He's threatening to flush you down the bog!

Please Mr Toro, can I know
What are the secrets of y
BoredomAs I walk amongst the shadows
Through a valley of death
In this empty alley way
On this field of battle
That I fight every day
I may walk as one
Or I may walk alone
Until the end of time itself
Looking up at the sky seeing all the lights
With death looming over me at every turn
Ive created this knife of rage and hatred
but your the ones who forged it and made it into a weapon
you never heard me screaming and you just laughed
And now it will be used on you and it shall be your downfall
Boredom (WIP)Along came a spider
Spinning webs of rage and hatred
welcome to the wonderful world of entertainment
Where stars are born and everyone tells lies and fibs
The government covers everything up.
The freaks and outcasts are the movement
Your the student
Its time to change the world kids (heres the blueprints...)
All across the world listen. (America...)
1 million fucking misfits screaming fuck the system!
This for those that came to tackle the giants and tyrants.
The revolution shall now be televised.
List of epic songs :PLong list..So enjoy :D
I recommend all these songs to people! :)
Anarchy Club - Assassins
Anarchy Club - Behind the Mask
Green day-21 guns
Green day ft U2-The saints are coming
Gothminister-Darkside
Gothminister-Happiness in darkness
Underoath-Writing on the walls
Iron Maiden-Aces high
Ozzy-Let it die
Murderdolls-White wedding
Arch enemy-We will rise
Paramore-Crush crush crush
Gorrilaz-Feel good inc
Rob zombie-Dragula
Guns n roses-Welcome to the jungle
Pink-Fun house
Young guns-Stitches
Young guns-Bones
Linkin park-Burn it down
Marilyn manson-I dont like the drugs but the drugs like me
Marilyn Manson-Leave a scar
Metallica-For whom the bells toll
Thin lizzy-Whiskey in the jar
Rise against-Make it stop
Rammstein-Mein teil
Fit for rivals-Crash
Black veil brides-Coffin
Deuce-America
Viking skull-Blackened sunrise
Bruce Dickinson-Accident of birth
Tenacious D-History
Awolnation-Sail
Megadeth-In my darkest hour
Slayer-raining blood
Motörhead - Enter Sandman
Slipknot-Psychosocial
Iron M
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Let me tell you a story to make your spines shiver as we sit around here tonight.

Unaware that the creature was watching me slowly closing in.
As if all of time had stopped still I was frozen to the spot with fear.I wanted to fade.
I fell to my knees..Something came out of the trees to take me back to hell.
The blazing of the fire did not harm me as I walked on the coal and ashes.
And my spirit was stolen from my shell..And I was once again a dammed soul.
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Dont judge..This is a WIP and was made out of boredom.
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~BVBonToast Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... spooky - i like it :D
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~TheManThatLaughed Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks :D
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~BVBonToast Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D It's OK
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~TheManThatLaughed Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yay!
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~Creativityshy Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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~TheManThatLaughed Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks
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~Creativityshy Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome
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~TheManThatLaughed Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
finished version [link]
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~Creativityshy Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it is really good :) you could totally be a writer :)
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~TheManThatLaughed Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
heh heh really?
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