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Let me tell you a story to make your spines shiver as we sit around here tonight.

Unaware that the creature was watching me slowly closing in.
As if all of time had stopped still I was frozen to the spot with fear.I wanted to fade.
I fell to my knees..Something came out of the trees to take me back to hell.
The blazing of the fire did not harm me as I walked on the coal and ashes.
And my spirit was stolen from my shell..And I was once again a dammed soul.
Dont judge..This is a WIP and was made out of boredom.
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BVBonToast Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... spooky - i like it :D
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks :D
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:iconbvbontoast:
BVBonToast Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D It's OK
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yay!
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Creativityshy Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
thanks
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Creativityshy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
finished version [link]
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Creativityshy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it is really good :) you could totally be a writer :)
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TheManThatLaughed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
heh heh really?
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